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Thursday 21 May 2020

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Rainbows End


Length
Bronze medal 2 paragraphs
Silver medal = 3 paragraphs
Gold medal = 5 paragraphs
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Instructions


Did you know, Miss West has NEVER been on a roller coaster!? Write a story about the first time Miss West visited Rainbows End and went on a roller coaster.


OR 


Write a recount about a time you have been to Rainbows End.


Ideas to use
Times: Before the roller coaster ride. During the roller coaster ride. After the roller
coaster ride.
Feelings: Scared/ nervous, excited/ happy
Roller coaster vocabulary: train, car, lapbar or harness, track, circuit
People: Instructor/guide, Friends/ Family, Miss West


Try to use some or all of these words in your writing:
nervous
thumping heart
wobbled

screamed
exhilarating
gulped

wind in my face
whistled
chatter

shuddered
flying
windswept


Start Writing below



One sunny morning, Miss West decided it was time to face her fears and go on a
roller coaster for the very first time. She packed a bag for the day, got in her car
and headed off to Rainbows End by the time we got there we had to pay to get in
then I ask if we could go on the roller coaster but she said no and I said why
sister she said because it goes fast and I don’t like going fast and I went to go
on the roller coaster and it was so fast and fun and then we had lunch then we
went to the fear fall and it was fun because we went up high and went down so
fast and it was like fell off a high building

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